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distant storm & new house

Postby JordanP on Sun Nov 27, 2005 8:35 am

Hi,

My wife and I have finally moved into our new house !! Yipee!

Been here for almost 2 weeks and finally got a little bit of storm action. Quite a way off and nothing too spectacular, but as you can see from the images the covered deck I'm shooting from is set up to be a front row seat when we get a solid lightning show.

critique welcome...

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Postby Greg S on Sun Nov 27, 2005 8:57 am

Fantastic shots Craig.
You have a great view, I know where to come to practice my storm photography :D
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Postby kipper on Sun Nov 27, 2005 9:03 am

I'd be inclined to crop out suburbia and just leave the silhouettes of the hills. For some reason I don't really like to see houses and lighting from suburbs in a lightning shot. However I don't mind seeing cities and their lighting, think their having been a few great shots of lightning cracking over skyscrapers.
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Postby xerubus on Sun Nov 27, 2005 9:31 am

congrats on moving into the new house!!

the shots are wonderful....

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Postby Alpha_7 on Sun Nov 27, 2005 10:30 am

Nice work Craig, and a great view from your new place!
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Postby Potatis on Sun Nov 27, 2005 10:42 am

Wow! I love those clouds! Love the colour of the lightning in #3.
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Postby LostDingo on Sun Nov 27, 2005 10:54 am

I like the last one best but tend to agree with Kipper in maybe some judicious cropping out civilization would benefit 8)
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Postby sirhc55 on Sun Nov 27, 2005 11:02 am

Craig - electricity from nature and man-made - all three pics are a tribute to you and your superb location :)
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Postby Geoff on Sun Nov 27, 2005 11:15 am

Craig mate! Great shots, I particularly like no. 3 too! Must be a great feeling settling into the new home!! Well done :)
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Postby avkomp on Sun Nov 27, 2005 12:00 pm

some nice shots here.

I think there is enough hold the viewers interest in the clouds /lightning
so I agree that you could have a look at a pano crop and remove suburbia.

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Postby MATT on Sun Nov 27, 2005 12:32 pm

Wow, looks like your new house is going to be a great asset to youre photo taking.

Some good shots there already.

Enjoy your new house

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Postby the foto fanatic on Sun Nov 27, 2005 12:36 pm

Congrats on the new place, Craig.
Hope you'll have more time for photography now!
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Postby timbo on Sun Nov 27, 2005 12:46 pm

Beautiful shots Craig. Thanks for sharing them. I think the cropping is just fine as it stands: The patch of suburbia throws the majesty of the lightning into proportion. Well done!
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Postby JordanP on Sun Nov 27, 2005 9:23 pm

Thanks for the comments everyone.

Here is the cropped version as a few have suggested .... what are your thoughts .... depending on what I was using the image for I still perfer the one with the foregroung if for nothing else but the contrast of power

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Postby Geoff on Sun Nov 27, 2005 9:30 pm

Craig,
I think I prefer the uncropped version however this one is still very powerful as it is (cropped). What a difference though. The colours in the sky from the illuminating lightning strike is great...quite ery and powerful!!
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Postby wendellt on Sun Nov 27, 2005 9:40 pm

shucks

there are a heap of raging storms around but these are exceptional. I like the colours and in the clouds the most.
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Postby xerubus on Sun Nov 27, 2005 9:42 pm

i like the uncropped version.... gives a better idea of the size of the storm.

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Postby stormygirl on Sun Nov 27, 2005 10:29 pm

:shock: Wow! What a fantastic view you have! These lightning images are wonderful with the CG's (cloud to ground) and the CC's lighting up the cloud structure. Beautiful! Mother nature at her most powerful!

I prefer the uncropped version too :wink: . Do you think you might be able to send some storms down my way? I'm getting a little bored with photographing sunsets!
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Postby Onyx on Sun Nov 27, 2005 11:33 pm

Congrats on the new house Craig, I was wondering about your missing presence on these forums for a while there...

Great set of shots - I like how you've made them different, colour cast wise. There still a bit of what looks like flaring in the bottom left on the cropped version.

Lightning photos used to impress me a great deal, but lately having felt it's wrath upon our house, I can't say it's my favouritest subject ATM. ;)
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Postby Greg B on Mon Nov 28, 2005 11:23 am

Wow Craig, that first shot in particular is a doozy (ie that means really good)
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