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Redhead Beauties

Postby stubbsy on Mon Nov 21, 2005 7:53 pm

Just discovered a few hundred images I'd missed from our mini outing to Redhead Beach and Awabakal park last Saturday. Below are two favourites and I must say I'm sure glad I found them. Click a pic for a larger version


70-200 VR, 1/6 sec, F20
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24-120 VR, 1/15 sec, F3.5
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Edit: Had the EXIF data on the wrong pics. Swapped them around and now they are correct :oops:
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Postby jethro on Mon Nov 21, 2005 7:55 pm

Stubbsy, the first shot reminds me of when I used to play around with the program BRYCE. has a similar feel
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Postby blacknstormy on Mon Nov 21, 2005 7:58 pm

Stubbsy - I love the first one !!!!!
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Postby wendellt on Mon Nov 21, 2005 8:03 pm

wow these are stunnning peter especially the fist one with the subtle velvety tones in the water, extremely appealing.
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Postby Slider on Mon Nov 21, 2005 8:06 pm

Very nice shots Peter. I love the first one. :D Great Colours.
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Postby avkomp on Mon Nov 21, 2005 10:00 pm

like the first one a lot.

simple and effective.

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Postby marcotrov on Mon Nov 21, 2005 10:20 pm

Stubsy the first one is a corker! Lovely composition and balance. The fluid movemnt of the waves and the immovability of the rock. Beautiful :wink:
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Postby mic on Mon Nov 21, 2005 11:01 pm

The Sunset for me Stubbsy,

Bloody Beeeeeeaaauuuutiiiffulllllllllllllllll !!

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Postby sheepie on Tue Nov 22, 2005 6:21 am

The first one was certainly worth th amount of effort you put in to getting the shot Peter.
For those who may be intrested, Peter took several shots of the same rock - trying different settings and angles, timings with the waves, etc. This is one of many that worked, but I think is by far the best - and is a ripper :)
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Postby Greg B on Tue Nov 22, 2005 8:37 am

Number 1 is a corker Peter, really something.
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Postby moggy on Tue Nov 22, 2005 9:27 am

I like both of them Peter, they're as different as chalk and cheese but both appeal. Well done. :)

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Postby Geoff on Tue Nov 22, 2005 9:44 am

Peter - No. One does it for me too! Well done :) Your SHOT shines :D :D (just had to say that)...
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Postby Alpha_7 on Tue Nov 22, 2005 9:46 am

I think these both, my my favourite would be number 1, as its a different perspective and capture to the standard beach photography we see.

One Slime covered rock and surge whitewash, I find it almost poetic :)
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Postby sirhc55 on Tue Nov 22, 2005 11:37 am

Sometimes it is strange to enter critique after so many before have praised #1.

I personally do not find anything in #1 to be excited about. But, #2 is superb. The reflections in the wet sand of the sky compliment this fine sunrise. The colours are emotive and are indicative of a fine and beautiful day ahead :)
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Postby stubbsy on Tue Nov 22, 2005 11:57 am

Thanks one and all for your comments. For me these are two of my three favourite shots from the outing.

Chris - I'd rather an honest critique than an ego stroke any day. I understand your point about the first one in that it is, after all, just a rock. Were I to choose between these 2 I'd pick the second since the colours are just sublime and I love the way the wet sand mirrors the sky (but I still love #1 :wink: )

And a comment on PP - #1 was difficult to get right and I ended up doing this as two layers in PSCS. All except the rock and it's reflection are one layer and therock and reflection are the other layer. With both in the same layer I got blue water and a nice looking rock or white water and brownish moss.

#2 on the other hand is almost straight from the camera (a little contrast was all I did)
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Postby tarotastic on Tue Nov 22, 2005 4:16 pm

The first one really appeals. It's almost difficult to get a sense of perspective on it. Could almost be a tsunami about to hit a big island! Awesome pic.
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Postby stubbsy on Tue Nov 22, 2005 6:13 pm

Thanks Taro

I'd never actually thought about it that way, but you're correct.
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