A few from Williamstown (5 img)

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A few from Williamstown (5 img)

Postby Aussie Dave on Sun Nov 20, 2005 2:38 pm

Woke up just before the sunrise this morning and had two thoughts go through my mind, go back to sleep OR get up and go take some photos.
I decided to do the latter, and here are the results:

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All taken in Williamstown (Melbourne). I was hoping for a little less cloud cover, but I'm reasonably happy with what I shot.

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Postby Killakoala on Sun Nov 20, 2005 2:45 pm

I am glad you got up and decided to take some photos instead of sleeping. The results look well worth it :)

The clouds add an extra dramatic dimension to your images. Sunrise is my favorite time of day for photography. Much better than sunset.

Thanks for sharing your images with us.
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Postby stubbsy on Sun Nov 20, 2005 3:02 pm

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I really like #3 and the way you've captured those golden tones reflecting off the water
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Postby Alpha_7 on Sun Nov 20, 2005 3:06 pm

Dave, my favourite is number #2 followed by #3 as steve said the clouds help enchance these sunrise shots. BTW number 4 the horizon the the right looks crooked, but I think its just distortion from your lens.. that or the uneven cloud cover is just tripping with my eyes.
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Postby Aussie Dave on Sun Nov 20, 2005 4:20 pm

Cheers guys :)

Killa - when I was shooting the HMAS Castlemain, I was thinking of you...believe it or not !

Stubbsy - I really like the yellow tones in the 3rd as well. I manually bracketed a few shots of this image, just to play it safe. This was the best one. I might try layering a couple for a "bigger dynamic range" look.

Alpha - I think it might be barrel distortion (or a touch of both). The kit lens out wide often bends the image (especially at the edges). I might start calling this lens the Yuri Gellar Lens :lol:

I also took a 19 image panorama of the Westgate Bridge right around to the end of the City Skyline. Didn't come out too bad (using Panorama Factory), although unfortunately it isn't "monitor friendly". You can either fit to screen, which takes away all the detail, or go 100% and have to scroll across the image - which takes away from the effect of the shot (as the downsized image is 6000px long & 750px high) :(
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Postby stubbsy on Sun Nov 20, 2005 4:32 pm

Dave

Why not just post a link to the pano with maybe a thumbnail to whet our appetite.
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Postby Aussie Dave on Sun Nov 20, 2005 4:43 pm

stubbsy wrote:Dave

Why not just post a link to the pano with maybe a thumbnail to whet our appetite.


Hi Stubbsy
as requested...

Please note: the large version is about 600Kb

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Would have been nicer with the sun out, but that's Melbourne !
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Postby marcotrov on Sun Nov 20, 2005 4:44 pm

#2 and #3 my favourites Dave. Beautifully lit and exposed. That magic hour and your composition skills have done the trick.
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Postby Alpha_7 on Sun Nov 20, 2005 4:48 pm

Nice pano Dave, I've done a few big ones, I think 15 shots was my biggest thus far, in a little bit of a quandry as to whether I should print them and how big to print them. As you said pity about the sun, but we can only shoot with what the weather will provide.
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Postby ozimax on Sun Nov 20, 2005 6:28 pm

#3 Dave, the morning hours are great I agree but today I slept in! Max
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Postby stubbsy on Sun Nov 20, 2005 8:31 pm

Dave

Pano is good and looks like a typically overcast Melbourne day :wink: Thanks for sharing it. I'm impressed with the stitching too (I can see a little banding, but the only really noticeable join is on the funnel of the Toll? ship)
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Postby avkomp on Sun Nov 20, 2005 9:22 pm

I wouldnt knock the clouds.
quite often they will enhance a shot by making a plain blue sky much more interesting.

my favourites here are #2 then 1.

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Postby Aussie Dave on Mon Nov 21, 2005 7:23 am

stubbsy wrote:Dave

Pano is good and looks like a typically overcast Melbourne day :wink: Thanks for sharing it. I'm impressed with the stitching too (I can see a little banding, but the only really noticeable join is on the funnel of the Toll? ship)


Thanks Stubbsy. Panorama Factory is magnificent. Considering there are so many verticals (yacht masts) in the shot, which were all bobbing to and fro, it came out far better than I expected. The Toll ship was reversing into the docks, which is why it looks blurred and may not have stitched together 100%.

I might have a play and make a couple of smaller pano's from it, one of the Westgate Bridge and another of the city.

Avkomp - sorry, I didn't mean it to sound like I was knocking the clouds, as they do (and did) add to the photos. The image I had in my head was for more broken cloud with sun filtering through...but that's not what was on offer when I arrived....

All part of the learning curve... :lol:
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Postby BBJ on Mon Nov 21, 2005 7:42 am

Dave, wow i love #123, work well for me and think these are great. Other 2 are ok as well but yeh the top 3 really stand out to me and think it was worth getting up early for.
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