Lightning over Brissy

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Lightning over Brissy

Postby elffinarts on Wed Nov 16, 2005 1:45 am

from a few weeks back
I kept facing the wrong way, turning to accomodate that and then missing lightning in the direction I was originally facing. sheesh

the tall lights are from on top of the car park I was sheltering under.

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* Make: NIKON CORPORATION
* Model: NIKON D70
* Shutter Speed: 30/1 second
* F Number: F/22.0
* Focal Length: 18 mm
* ISO Speed: 640
* Date Picture Taken: Oct 24, 2005, 9:09:18 PM
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Postby Alpha_7 on Wed Nov 16, 2005 4:58 am

Nice capture, lighting is a tricky beast to capture, especially if you are presented with it from all angles :)
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Postby sheepie on Wed Nov 16, 2005 6:29 am

ahhh - the quality of lightning captures on this forum keeps getting better and better :)
I like this because the foreground inclusion gives you a sense of the size and immense power of the lightning - well done on a difficult subject to nail :)
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Postby BBJ on Wed Nov 16, 2005 6:52 am

Nice shot mark, it is hard to get i have been trying but yeh always seem to miss it, and ends up pi##ing down so give up.
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Postby ozimax on Wed Nov 16, 2005 11:25 am

Nice work, I was trying to do same last night in Coffs but was literally blown back in doors, covered in sand and muck! We'll keep trying anyway.

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Postby tasadam on Wed Nov 16, 2005 12:40 pm

Nice shot.
I clicked on the link for the bigger one and only got half the pic then it said done, is the link okay?

I kept facing the wrong way, turning to accomodate that and then missing lightning in the direction I was originally facing.

You need TWO cameras :D

One last thing, not meaning to be critical but are they dust bunnies I see in the bigger photo? Maybe need a clean of the sensor? They aren't big but there does seem to be a few black dots there.
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Postby dooda on Wed Nov 16, 2005 4:21 pm

Nice capture. We don't get a lot of lightening here so I haven't ever really had the opportunity to get it. I'll never forget a lightening storm I saw in Idaho though. The lightening looked as thick as a building, and we all had to squint it was so bright. But I digress, you positioned the lights well so that they add instead of subtract from the shot.
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Postby stormygirl on Wed Nov 16, 2005 8:16 pm

Very nice Mark! I'm still waiting for the elusive evening storm to make it's way across Melbourne. We had one a few mornings back, but there was no way I was getting out of bed at 2am......not even for lightning!

Camera is always ready to walk out the door, and so is the new tripod I have yet to christen! I just have to wait for Mother Nature to cooperate! One day it will happen.

Do you have any others from that night? I'd be interested in seeing them.
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Postby elffinarts on Fri Nov 18, 2005 3:20 am

tasadam wrote:Nice shot.
I clicked on the link for the bigger one and only got half the pic then it said done, is the link okay?

I kept facing the wrong way, turning to accomodate that and then missing lightning in the direction I was originally facing.

You need TWO cameras :D

One last thing, not meaning to be critical but are they dust bunnies I see in the bigger photo? Maybe need a clean of the sensor? They aren't big but there does seem to be a few black dots there.


http://www.gallery.elffinarts.com/album ... inarts.jpg
this link seems to work fine :)
sensor is clean as far as i know. may have been dust blown onto the lens through the course of the night shooting in the storm. Had a shitload of friggin moths circle me as I shot so they left bits of dusty/sticky wings everywhere as I swotted them away. lol
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Postby elffinarts on Fri Nov 18, 2005 3:25 am

stormygirl wrote:Do you have any others from that night? I'd be interested in seeing them.


just this one as the only other worthwhile shot of the storm from me:

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Date taken: 2005:10:24 21:31:48
Aperture: f/22.0
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Exposure time: 30.000 s (30/1)
Focal length: 18.00 (18/1)
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Postby xerubus on Fri Nov 18, 2005 8:30 am

that second shot is great Mark... nice...

where abouts was that shot from? area doesn't look familiar to me...

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Postby Alpha_7 on Fri Nov 18, 2005 2:39 pm

I personally like the second one better, but they are both great captures!
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Postby elffinarts on Fri Nov 18, 2005 6:50 pm

xerubus wrote:that second shot is great Mark... nice...

where abouts was that shot from? area doesn't look familiar to me...

cheers


it's shot from the rooftop of Indooroopilly shopping center. There were nearly no other cars left up there. (just the one old falcon some guy couldnt be bothered to move) and there is a small section where the rooftop carpark is under the cover of an air conditioning unit and that gives a mostly uninterrupted shot in a wide range of directions but I struggled to get the lens to not have lens flare from the very bright halogen lights up there. There is room for about 7 cars and 20 photographers up there in that spot.

With all the warnings of a season of storms coming up I expect it to be a regular meeting spot soon :D

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Postby xerubus on Fri Nov 18, 2005 6:56 pm

elffinarts wrote:
xerubus wrote:that second shot is great Mark... nice...

where abouts was that shot from? area doesn't look familiar to me...

cheers


it's shot from the rooftop of Indooroopilly shopping center. There were nearly no other cars left up there. (just the one old falcon some guy couldnt be bothered to move) and there is a small section where the rooftop carpark is under the cover of an air conditioning unit and that gives a mostly uninterrupted shot in a wide range of directions but I struggled to get the lens to not have lens flare from the very bright halogen lights up there. There is room for about 7 cars and 20 photographers up there in that spot.

With all the warnings of a season of storms coming up I expect it to be a regular meeting spot soon :D

cheers guys
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I think I may have to visit the spot soon :)

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Postby elffinarts on Fri Nov 18, 2005 7:08 pm

I was really wanting to head to the lookout on Mt Coot-Tha but with the number f strikes I saw up there I just couldnt take the risk. Shame as the view from up there would have been just that much better.
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