Rainbow Bee-Eater #2 (Portrait or Landscape Crop??)

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Rainbow Bee-Eater #2 (Portrait or Landscape Crop??)

Postby kipper on Tue Nov 01, 2005 6:52 am

In too minds as to which crop I prefer Portrait or Landscape. Help please :)

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Postby birddog114 on Tue Nov 01, 2005 7:03 am

kipper,
I like the portrait.
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Postby huynhie on Tue Nov 01, 2005 7:25 am

Portrait for me too :wink:
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Postby cameraguy21773 on Tue Nov 01, 2005 7:26 am

Both are so well composed and natural looking it's hard to choose. The portrait is nice because the bird is alertly upright so I guess I'd choose that. Was he watching you?
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Postby kipper on Tue Nov 01, 2005 7:29 am

They were watching a lot of things. Theirs heads dart all over tracking whats going around in their surroundings. There is about 5-8 pairs nested along a dried up river bed and each pair defends it's territory from the other.
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Postby stubbsy on Tue Nov 01, 2005 7:56 am

Darryl

Landscape for me (bet that helps, NOT). I prefer this because the tree branch leads the eye into the picture from the right to the bird, plus adds a little more visual interest. I won't even mention such technical rules as leading lines and rule of thirds since these are made to be broken. Damn I just mentioned them :wink:
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Postby rokkstar on Tue Nov 01, 2005 8:11 am

Darryl,

Landscape for me as well for exactly the same things that Peter mentioned.
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Postby marcotrov on Tue Nov 01, 2005 8:16 am

They are both lovely well composed images Darryl. I'm initially drawn to the landscape as Peter mentioned, but I also like the tighter crop offered by the portrait. Frame both and hang the one that appeals most given your mood :lol:

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Postby rog on Tue Nov 01, 2005 9:30 am

Just to be difficult ... try square. :)
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Postby Alpha_7 on Tue Nov 01, 2005 10:16 am

rokkstar wrote:Darryl,

Landscape for me as well for exactly the same things that Peter mentioned.


Same for me, I like a bit more branch.
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Postby wendellt on Tue Nov 01, 2005 11:27 am

landscape
more dramatic, a sense off centre placement of the subject allows it more attention
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Postby bloop on Tue Nov 01, 2005 11:41 am

Landscape for me too, just looks better!
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Postby kipper on Tue Nov 01, 2005 12:01 pm

Rog, while others do square crops for photos I hate doing them. I always try and keep them a 3:2 or 2:3 ratio
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Postby sirhc55 on Tue Nov 01, 2005 12:07 pm

Besides them both being superb shots I tend to agree with Peter et al on the landscape being the better of the two visually :D
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Postby ozczecho on Tue Nov 01, 2005 12:31 pm

Yeah go the landscape as the branch has a nice DoF...But both shots are worthy...
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Postby JordanP on Tue Nov 01, 2005 1:31 pm

Both presentations are great - you must be loving that lens. My vote is with the Portrait although I would crop a little bit off the top. I like the way the portrait presentation compliments the shape of the bird.

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Postby kipper on Tue Nov 01, 2005 1:36 pm

Certainly am!! :)

Went out today and caught some more lovely birds. Saw a Sacred Kingfisher but Kingfishers are on the nervous side. Think I might have to setup a blind to catch it.
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Postby avkomp on Tue Nov 01, 2005 4:09 pm

nice shot darryl.

Both look well composed but I perfer the landscape crop.

The portrait would be the one you might put on NSN or a bird book showing a bee-eater but the landscape crop lets the bird look into space and has leading lines (branches) so makes it more arty (IMHO)

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Postby shockadelica- on Tue Nov 01, 2005 6:00 pm

as said above.. portrait would be good for somekind of informative book
but as a photograph and as an artwork landscape.

as the branch is in a horizontal position i dont think it looks right
making the photo stand upright
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Postby jethro on Tue Nov 01, 2005 6:45 pm

Hey darryl nice to see the bazooka firing! Crop is for each persons choice.
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Postby fozzie on Tue Nov 01, 2005 6:55 pm

kipper,

IMHO: the portrait is the best shot.

You have a winner of a lens there. Worth every cent.
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Postby big pix on Tue Nov 01, 2005 8:56 pm

stubbsy wrote:Darryl

Landscape for me (bet that helps, NOT). I prefer this because the tree branch leads the eye into the picture from the right to the bird, plus adds a little more visual interest. I won't even mention such technical rules as leading lines and rule of thirds since these are made to be broken. Damn I just mentioned them :wink:


I agree with Peter........ landscape for me also......... and rules were made to be broken.........
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Postby kipper on Tue Nov 01, 2005 9:06 pm

Most times I don't think those taking bird photos adhere to the photography rules (eg. rule of thirds, leading lines etc). It's mostly these rules:

1) Good light
2) Get the bird facing you and have eye contact. Although back shots sometimes are nice to show the plumage on the back of the bird, but eye contact is still important
3) Get a good perch
4) Get the whole of the bird including feet (unless portrait)
5) Get a nice OOF background unless you're aim is to show environment
Don't get cluttered backgrounds or anything with lines going vertical/horizontal.

There are possibly some more that I don't have listed here as I'm still learning and only been at this for 6months now. If it isn't hard enough learning all of the aspects with photographing birds, it gets even harder learning all the various birds and identifying them by call or by seeing them zoom past you. I'm miles off learning them and probably even after 4-5 years I'll still be a noob!
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Postby Potatis on Tue Nov 01, 2005 9:31 pm

I'd like the portrait best if you cropped a lot off the top. :)
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Postby Slider on Tue Nov 01, 2005 9:32 pm

Superb shot. And landscape :D
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Postby blacknstormy on Tue Nov 01, 2005 9:36 pm

Fantastic photo! Bee eaters are a stunning bird!!
And for me - landscape :) To me the portrait is slightly too tight, not leaving enough 'breathing space' around the bird. The landscape lends itself to the composition of the shot, and to me is a more pleasing image.
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Postby mic on Tue Nov 01, 2005 10:03 pm

Beautiful Birdy Kippy,

The Landscape, the branch ads to it.

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Postby cyanide on Wed Nov 02, 2005 12:02 am

Hi kipper,

The landscape crop does it for me - I like the branch and the distribution of "space".... very nice shot!

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