Misty sunrise

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Misty sunrise

Postby poiter86 on Thu Oct 20, 2005 12:37 am

G'day all,

1st image post here ... so be gentle :wink: :P

A misty sunrise in the park over the road from my office.

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A larger (1.5mb) image here Misty sunrise large BTW, taken on tokina 12-24 @24mm with a little PP to reduce the early morning shadows.

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Postby Willy wombat on Thu Oct 20, 2005 12:47 am

Its a tricky exposure to get right Pete but you have done a reasonably good job. It has potential. :)
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Postby Alpha_7 on Thu Oct 20, 2005 12:50 am

Wow... I haven't had a chance to try this sort of shot... not being close to rivers or creeks and not waking up earlier enough... but if i did I'd be more then happy with this, very nice atmosphere and you captured some wildlife in it too :)
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Postby Oneputt on Thu Oct 20, 2005 6:31 am

Very nice Poiter :D I know how difficult these shots are. I would prefer if the middle clump of grass were not there though.
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Postby birddog114 on Thu Oct 20, 2005 6:36 am

Oneputt wrote:Very nice Poiter :D I know how difficult these shots are. I would prefer if the middle clump of grass were not there though.


Poiter,
Nice capture! Morning misty!

Oneputt,
I'm waiting for sunrise too! :lol: Now am sitting here and waiting for the FedEx truck arrives.
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Postby poiter86 on Thu Oct 20, 2005 10:38 am

Thanks for the comments all.

Yes it was a tad early when i captured this one - Would have been around 5.45am.

"I would prefer if the middle clump of grass were not there though." ... yep, would open up the shot a bit more. Next time, more concentration on composition and not so much on avoiding stepping in duck poo or the bog patches :lol: :wink:
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Postby sirhc55 on Thu Oct 20, 2005 10:51 am

Almost makes me envious of early risers :wink: This is a very emotive shot complete with, can I say this, a DUCK :!:
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Postby gleff on Thu Oct 20, 2005 10:54 am

I really like this kind of shot. it's a very romantic shot. Not that i'm a SNAG or anything.
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Postby stubbsy on Thu Oct 20, 2005 1:04 pm

Pete

This is a great capture. While it would be better without the foreground reeds the reality is that life is never perfect. This is a quality shot you can be proud of and especially so given that it features one of our forum favourites - a duck :wink: :lol:
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Postby Frankenstein on Thu Oct 20, 2005 2:35 pm

Pete,
I like it - it captures the mood nicely.

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Postby mudder on Thu Oct 20, 2005 2:49 pm

G'day Pete,
Wow that's a great first post, the image gives me a feeling of calm, nicely captured. Would have been an exposure nightmare so you've done really well...
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Postby poiter86 on Thu Oct 20, 2005 3:21 pm

Thanks for all the comments guys. Good to get constructive comments from different points of view.

Regarding the foreground, I was debating that myself as I was trying to give a bit better detail in the foreground, but the bright sunrise really made it hard to find a balanced exposure that didnt take away from the morning atmosphere. I guess i stuck with this, because i figured that the reality is that the morning is a bit dark and the essence of the shot is the sunrise in a natural watery setting - the mist was a bonus that added to the mood.

Favoured ducks :? :?: ... is that like the mystery subject for newbies like myself? Havent seen any reference to ducks in the forums so far ... a running joke?

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Postby stubbsy on Thu Oct 20, 2005 5:18 pm

poiter86 wrote:Favoured ducks :? :?: ... is that like the mystery subject for newbies like myself? Havent seen any reference to ducks in the forums so far ... a running joke?

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Sad to say it's a little in joke. In earlier days there was a preponderance of duck shots here since, in photographic terms they are, well, sitting ducks (sorry :lol: ) so easy targets for a shot. So it got to the stage where there'd be a collective <groan> when another duck shot popped up.
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Postby sheepie on Thu Oct 20, 2005 5:27 pm

stubbsy wrote:
poiter86 wrote:Favoured ducks :? :?: ... is that like the mystery subject for newbies like myself? Havent seen any reference to ducks in the forums so far ... a running joke?

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Sad to say it's a little in joke. In earlier days there was a preponderance of duck shots here since, in photographic terms they are, well, sitting ducks (sorry :lol: ) so easy targets for a shot. So it got to the stage where there'd be a collective <groan> when another duck shot popped up.


Perhaps this should be in the site faq!!!

I like this shot Pete - nice light, and looks like a beaut spot :) I don't have a problem with the foreground, the central clump of grass makes this pic in my opinion ;)
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Postby marcotrov on Thu Oct 20, 2005 8:14 pm

Excellent first post Pete. You have managed difficult lighting conditions well to produce moody and visually appealing image.
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Postby E1Shane on Thu Oct 20, 2005 8:22 pm

Nice shot in tricky light. I would of liked to see a continous line of grass in the foregroung just to hold it together, maybe by point the camera down a bit ??
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