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Now that the comp is over

Postby Slider on Sun Sep 25, 2005 11:45 am

A couple of 10 second exposures. Thought I'd try something different.

Set up the plants indoors to eliminate any possibility of movement.

Stopped the aperture right down to improve DOF and eliminate ambient light and then manually set off the flash (big old Hanimex) from different angles and fairly close to the subject.

The best I could manage in 10 Seconds was 3 flashes. Tried different angles but 1 from each side slightly in front of the subject and then 1 from behind seemed to work best.

The first was just the untouched flower, then I sprayed some water on it for the second shot and the third has a bit of Photoshop trickery just for fun.

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Postby avkomp on Sun Sep 25, 2005 2:41 pm

I like the first 2.

Dramatic images indeed.
I would lose the photoshop trickery on the third. The images are good enough in their own right. I find the flare in the third quite distracting.
Although I am sure others will have the opinion that it isnt.

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Postby stubbsy on Sun Sep 25, 2005 2:47 pm

Mark

These were good, but the one you entered was better. I also don't like the PS flare.
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Postby mic on Sun Sep 25, 2005 3:07 pm

Slider, love the 2nd !

Good experimenting.

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