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by bwhinnen on Fri Nov 26, 2004 7:49 pm
I'll add more as I get through them.
This was my first hand held attempt with a subject and water. Was taken at the top waterfall in the Chinese Gardens, Darling Harbour, the willing subject is my wife
Shutter priority, 1/2 second F/22. 28-80G. I do notice the overexposed area and it bugs me...
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by xerubus on Fri Nov 26, 2004 7:59 pm
great shot... especially with the slow shutter speed... your wife must have been perfectly still ...
the over exposure can't really be helped with the direct sun... but i've given it a go for you... sorry... that's about the best i can do....

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by Killakoala on Fri Nov 26, 2004 8:08 pm
It's a really good attempt to get the effect you were after.
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by xerubus on Fri Nov 26, 2004 8:10 pm
brett ... those meerkats are wonderful... well done.
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by bago100 on Fri Nov 26, 2004 8:10 pm
Good photo
I've tried to crop the photo and see how that looks. Hope you don't mind.
Rule of thirds can't be used here when this is done unfortunately
Was the overblown right hand side obvious in the preview screen?
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by Killakoala on Fri Nov 26, 2004 8:11 pm
Those Meerkats are absolutely sensational. They are one of my most favorite animals.
I love how you've gotten them to stand to attention on command  They must have known you were taking their photo and posed for you.
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by Glen on Fri Nov 26, 2004 8:13 pm
Brett,
great shot! can see the concentration on your wifes face, obviously you told her not to move.
Bago,
Well done, "neat and in the middle"
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by bwhinnen on Fri Nov 26, 2004 8:25 pm
Glen wrote:Brett,
great shot! can see the concentration on your wifes face, obviously you told her not to move.
Bago,
Well done, "neat and in the middle"
No I think that was the "Have you taken the photo yet" look, I asked her to stay still in the next one...
Crop does look better and a good idea
Yeah the blown section was there in the preview, but I didn't want to underexpose as I wasn't sure how much I could have recovered.
The standing to attention of the Meerkats is a trick they've learnt when someone walks up to their enclosure holding a bag near the edge of the wall. I think half of all the photos I took at Taronga were of the Meerkats, my wife adores them.
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by Glen on Fri Nov 26, 2004 8:32 pm
Brett,
after the first 3,000 photos taken of my wife round the house she doesn't even pay any attention to me any more when the camera comes out 
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by bago100 on Fri Nov 26, 2004 8:47 pm
Brett
A little photoshopping and you have this
What do you think?
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by bwhinnen on Fri Nov 26, 2004 9:10 pm
Now that I like! Thanks!
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by kipper on Fri Nov 26, 2004 9:37 pm
I've got a good closeup of a meerkat when I went to the Melbourne Zoo. Thought I had a lot of keepers from the day trip with my sister and nephew but only about 40-50% 
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by bwhinnen on Fri Nov 26, 2004 9:51 pm
Now this is my favourite animal. A bit young to be called King, so perhaps Prince?
Shot with the 70-300G @ 130mm through the wonderful glass that everyone uses now.
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by kipper on Fri Nov 26, 2004 10:21 pm
So Brett, is that the Nikkor AFG 70-300mm F4-5.6 lense?
If so, that is bloody amazing. Do you have the shooting data for that tiger shot?
I'm half considering selling my Sigma 70-300mm APO super macro, never been able to achieve those sort of shots with it. Maybe it's user error I don't know.
Although I just saw this.....some of them are APO II so I dunno what the difference is:
http://www.photosig.com/go/photos/browse?id=28325
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by bwhinnen on Fri Nov 26, 2004 10:33 pm
kipper wrote:So Brett, is that the Nikkor AFG 70-300mm F4-5.6 lense? If so, that is bloody amazing. Do you have the shooting data for that tiger shot? I'm half considering selling my Sigma 70-300mm APO super macro, never been able to achieve those sort of shots with it. Maybe it's user error I don't know. Although I just saw this.....some of them are APO II so I dunno what the difference is: http://www.photosig.com/go/photos/browse?id=28325
Yes it is that lens, I've heard (never used the Sigma as the APO II was more expensive and the 70-300G was a lens to learn with) that the APO II is a good lens.
Focal Length: 130mm
1/80 sec - F/4.2
Sensitivity: ISO 200
Tone Comp: User-Defined Custom Curve (WW 3.5)
One thing that I always do with the 70-300G is use the UnSharp Mask feature under Nikon Capture, which really helps bring out the detail in the photo.
I've found the WW 3.5 curve to give me the best results with what I shoot straight off camera in good lighting.
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by Mj on Fri Nov 26, 2004 11:04 pm
Just goes to show the 70-300 lens can get great results... just have to have the right conditions and light levels though otherwise it can be hard going to get that elusive shot.
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by kipper on Fri Nov 26, 2004 11:30 pm
I assume this photo was taken freestanding, no tripod etc.
ps. I only have the APO I not the II, not sure what the difference is. Whether the optics are greatly improved or whether it was something else in the lense that they changed.
pps. my cat is cuter - http://forum.d70users.com/viewtopic.php?t=1091
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by wile_E on Sat Nov 27, 2004 12:02 am
love the shot of the tiger brett!
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by Killakoala on Sat Nov 27, 2004 9:30 am
Tigers make great subjects. You've nailed some 'life' in that animal too. Well done...
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