Thanks for the positives!
Here's an altered version that may address some of your suggestions.
I've always used Adobe RGB as my
PS colorspace and my pixspot pictures always looked really washed out, so I was trying sRGB for the first time with this picture and the color was better but the highlights blew out. Weird.
Well, here's the new version. It was already a serious crop, but I cropped it a little more and removed the offending grass.
