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Postby ozimax on Wed Feb 23, 2005 9:35 pm

Second shot in sequence following on from yesterday's image, I think this one is actually better, any comments appreciated?

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Postby sirhc55 on Wed Feb 23, 2005 9:40 pm

Another surfing marvel from the king.

Just one suggestion, if you straighten the horizon the shot becomes more dramatic :wink:
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Postby Matt. K on Wed Feb 23, 2005 9:42 pm

Wahoo! A stunner! Sell it!
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Postby christiand on Wed Feb 23, 2005 9:44 pm

Great shot.

He's about to loose his pants though.

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Postby ozimax on Wed Feb 23, 2005 9:46 pm

Actually Chris, the background (if that's what you're referring to) is the slope of Mutton Bird Island, adjacent to Coffs Hbr Marina and Jetty :-)

True, he's about to be dakked but I think we might fix that up in PS for decency sake!

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Postby sirhc55 on Wed Feb 23, 2005 9:48 pm

ozimax wrote:Actually Chris, the background (if that's what you're referring to) is the slope of Mutton Bird Island, adjacent to Coffs Hbr Marina and Jetty :-)

True, he's about to be dakked but I think we might fix that up in PS for decency sake!

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Postby Glen on Wed Feb 23, 2005 9:55 pm

Max, seems like you are the king of surf shots around these parts. Another great one
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Postby stubbsy on Wed Feb 23, 2005 9:55 pm

Max

This is the better shot of the two. The focus on this is sharp as a tack - I can feel the salt spray :wink:
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Postby ozimax on Wed Feb 23, 2005 9:59 pm

Thanks for the positive comments, this one's going off to Billabong Inc, we'll see what happens, we can only hope...payments aside, this photography thing is very rewarding, waiting for weeks even months for the right moment.

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Postby Matty B on Wed Feb 23, 2005 10:00 pm

So clear and crisp.........and exciting! 8)
What a privilege to come here every night and see a fantastic shot like this! I'm not a surfer by any stretch - but I do enjoy action / sports stuff like this. If I was a surfer I'd be absolutely wrapped to have this as a print!!
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Postby ozimax on Wed Feb 23, 2005 10:09 pm

It's fun to do, and hopefully fun to make a bit of pocket money sometime in the near future (maybe to buy a nice 600mm Nikon lens of some description ...?) We'll see what happens, Max
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Postby SoCal Steve on Thu Feb 24, 2005 7:53 am

sirhc55 -

You've brought up an interesting point, Chris, talking about the horizon in the picture.

If everyone is going to think that something is wrong with one of your pictures (even though it actually isn't), is it better to change it to make it look right to everybody or leave it alone? Especially when you won't be there to explain to each person that they are mistaken.

Any thoughts?
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Postby Oneputt on Thu Feb 24, 2005 8:44 am

I agree with Stubbsy - I liked the other one but it was slightly out of focus. This one is spot on, another great shot. :D
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Defining sharpness

Postby ozimax on Thu Feb 24, 2005 9:12 am

Oneputt, good point, how does one define sharpness? I would imagine sharp at 100% magnification is the guide? Am I correct here? For eg, this image is very closely cropped and still sharp, others are sharp at maybe half cropped image? Just some thinking out loud here...Max
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Postby Matt. K on Thu Feb 24, 2005 5:40 pm

Sharpness is relative. Many portrait photographers avoid using modern lenses because they are too sharp. If the image demands sharpness then it must have sharpness. Some images demand softness. If I photograph my wife she demands softness. So, enough about sharpness.
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Postby stubbsy on Thu Feb 24, 2005 5:48 pm

Good point Matt. Of course I can use a modern lens and soften it during PP I guess.
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Postby ajo43 on Thu Feb 24, 2005 7:14 pm

another fantastic shot. You obviously have a hair trigger on that D70 to get that timing so perfect.

And the auto focus is right on the mark. What setting did you have it on? Dynamic?

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Postby Killakoala on Thu Feb 24, 2005 7:18 pm

Yep, another great shot from the master.

Awesome timing, well done.
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Postby ozimax on Thu Feb 24, 2005 7:44 pm

Thanks Steve, and Jonesy, I am using a Tamron 70-300mm lens (no way I would take an expensive Nikkor out in the water), manual settings F6 @ 1/1250 I think, the Tamron takes ages to autofocus if you get away from the general area of focus, so I keep half pressing the shutter all the time to keep it in focus range, then it's a matter of being quick on the draw.

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There is a heap of work to be done there to get the photos uniform and looking smart, but it's a start!
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Postby mudder on Sat Feb 26, 2005 7:12 am

G'day,
Another fantastic surf action shot, wow! You're turnign out some brilliant surf action shots Oz, Let us know how you go with Billabong... I can see your shots getting on the covers :-)

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Postby the foto fanatic on Sat Feb 26, 2005 7:16 am

This is a real action stopper, with all of those perfectly frozen drops of water.
Well done indeed. :)
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Postby ozimax on Sat Feb 26, 2005 8:54 pm

Thanks Mudder and cricket, website although under construction is under way at

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