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Big thanks to Wendel for the confidence to tackle this shoot!!

I was a nervous as anything, this girl is the real deal (but what a great girl - wish all models had her class)

Hope you like them......(all shot in and around my house)

All had 'cooler' tones applied.....









Cheers
Dan

Well done Dan, these are some of the best shots I've seen from you, I really like the style and processing in these. I'm sure your client would be happy, well done.

Thanks matey.......appreciate it!

What Craig said!

These models all look anorexic though in my eyes...no wonder there's an epidemic of young girls with body image issues.

None the less, these are good. Nice use of lighting and poses. The first one to me is best. Pensive, inquisitive and dreamy! Well done.

very nice...love it

Geoff wrote:What Craig said!

These models all look anorexic though in my eyes...no wonder there's an epidemic of young girls with body image issues.

None the less, these are good. Nice use of lighting and poses. The first one to me is best. Pensive, inquisitive and dreamy! Well done.

IMO this model is thin, not anorexic. She has flesh on her bones and you can't count her ribs.
A much better model than those you generally see walking the catwalk.

Ok...'too' thin IMHO

Very Nice Dan - the house looks great too

Dan,

Probably the best material you have posted so far here. Great style and creativity also. The model seems to look much more natural than those in your other photos. Looks like you put a lot of work into this and it paid off. Congratulations!

Alex

Great Images, love the lighting

Christian

Bloody Great Mate !

Mic

Thanks guys.........very much!

The lighting on these, are just simply stunning!! Great job Dan

These are by far the best shots I have seen from you. They have unprecedented class.
I love your pp work and I have never seen it shine like it does in these shots.
Well done - That will be one very happy client!

Harry

i like this set better theres more attention to theme and tone and most importantly the fashion

and she looks more natural in her poses/expressions

especially like the teddy bear shot phone shot

by the way who styled?

well done!

wendellt wrote:by the way who styled?

Me

Thanks again everyone........

Dan

Out of the 4, #2 is probably the best in terms of styling, composition, etc. Ditto to what has already been said.

#2 has the best composition, and I wouldn't mind #1 if the composition wasn't as weak on the edges as it seems.

You're still blowing out highlights. Either learn to use your camera better or fix it in RAW, Dan. For you using RAW, that really would be the sweetest thing.

In parallel with everybody, they're very nice images indeed.

Very good work and very stylish!
Well done

Dan
No 1 and 3 are perfectly exposed and have a great perspective. Skin tones which I believe are the most important are well exposed, the skin is the perfect colour from my monitors view.
No 2 is blown out in the highlight and quarter tones. Colour Saturation is great as well in 1 and 3. I must say these are commercially acceptable.
Keep up the good work
cheers
Jethro

Great work Dan. I really like this set. #2, 3 and 4 the strongest. I feel the posture of the model is not flattering and detracts from ther other elements, particularly the upper thigh area. The whole pose seems rather constricted. Overall the high key treatment is great.
cheers
marco

Lovin the feedback guys, Leigh just in my defense when i convert the image in CS3 (save for web) it does seem to blow the highlights out (any one else using CS3 find this?) My Adobe1998 versions are not as bright.....cheers guys!

Dan