macka wrote:Norbs, I think you already know where you could have improved here, DOF-wise, particularly in #1. You can get away with a 2.8 for a shot of one person, head on, but with three people at varying distances from the lens you will need to stop it down a bit. The other issue in this photo is the way the guy's head disapears into the blown background. I'm guessing they were in front of a pretty bright window, so perhaps you could have picked a better spot.
However, #3 is fantastic because of the shallow DOF, and you've made wonderful use of available light to show the amazing texture on the baby's feet. Love the B&W conversion, also. This is a really lovely shot.
I also very much like #2. Yes, the DOF is shallow and you've focussed on his little nose and mouth, but it doesn't bother me so much in this case since his eyes are closed anyway, and a little bit of softness suits a portrait of a newborn.
Nicely done!
Cheers,
Yep. Points noted. Because it was in the hospital room, there was limited room and pretty hard to get good angles. Given my time again, and with a clearer head, I would have swung them around to face the window, but with a few other visitors there, I didnt want to intrude too much.