Coconuts in Mexico

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Coconuts in Mexico

Postby sguerrero on Tue Nov 22, 2005 5:29 am

Hi, this is the first picture I post in the forum. Let me know your comments. Thanks in advance.

Boca de Pascuales, Colima. Mexico.

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Postby Heath Bennett on Tue Nov 22, 2005 7:49 am

I like this shot - it reminds me of the backgrounds behind 2D platform games, great texture. There is a chance I'm going to be in Mexico for Easter next year, never been there before.
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Postby Matt. K on Tue Nov 22, 2005 8:37 am

A Beautiful image! Thanks for posting it.
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Postby marcotrov on Tue Nov 22, 2005 9:19 am

thanks for the visual feast. I also like the image. That mistiness in the backgorund reall adds to the visual impact.
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Postby ghost on Tue Nov 22, 2005 9:45 am

Love it. I agree that the mist in the background really makes it.

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Postby agriffiths on Tue Nov 22, 2005 10:23 am

Fantastic!!
The trees in the forground all appear to be leaning together as if they are worshiping the sunset/sunrise.... and the trees in the background are all queuing up in the mist to take their turn :)
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Postby Alpha_7 on Tue Nov 22, 2005 10:32 am

Heath is right this reminds me of a desktop background, or from a 2D platform game, Jungle Jill or the like.. :) Nice first post, out of interest to you have any larger crops ? With more canopy or sand in them ? While I like the "sea of trunks" I would like to see more of the coconut stand.
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Postby Onyx on Tue Nov 22, 2005 11:11 am

I like it. it does seem a little unreal due to the deep depth of field and no trailing off into blur background, it's almost like a painting.

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Postby sguerrero on Tue Nov 22, 2005 1:57 pm

Here are some more pics of the same trip

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and to add a REAL surreal photo check this....I never saw anything like it. I had to stop in the middle of the highway stopping traffic to take this one...

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Thanks for the commets. I could add that there was a lot of myst at that time since the coconut growers were watering that field early in the day.
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Postby Killakoala on Tue Nov 22, 2005 7:18 pm

The first thing i thought when i saw the first image was, 'That looks like the opening scene to Apocalypse Now.

The mist gives it an eerie/surreal feel. I like it.
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Postby dooda on Tue Nov 22, 2005 7:43 pm

I could see myself taking 50 shots and not getting it quite right. I do think that it maybe needs a little more on the bottom, as you can see some of the bottoms of the trees, but not all of them. Really nice though, and the light quality is bang on. Great shot.
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Postby blacknstormy on Tue Nov 22, 2005 8:12 pm

love your first post !!!! Congrats !
You've managed to capture the beautiful soft pastels spot on !!
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Postby Willy wombat on Tue Nov 22, 2005 10:04 pm

Lovely simple soft colours. First + 3rd shot is very good.
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Postby sguerrero on Sat Nov 26, 2005 8:26 am

Thanks for all your comments! This gives me confidence to keep going.
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Postby marcotrov on Sat Nov 26, 2005 9:36 am

Nice images. The image imapct of #2(in the second set) is considerably reduced by the interjection of that distracting palm frond on the right. Without that the shot would take on a whole new visual vibrance and compositional balance that would really make it a lovely image. Be interesting to remove it in PP and see the result.
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Postby glass eye on Sat Nov 26, 2005 10:48 am

Looks like a painting UNBELIEVABLE.
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