Pelican 1, or 2 ?

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Pelican 1, or 2 ?

Postby ghost on Thu Nov 17, 2005 8:52 pm

Recent shot of pelican (kit lens...I wish I'd used my 50mm, the sharpness I know is not quite there).

But this question is about B&W conversion. Which do you prefer 1 or 2?

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Postby johndec on Thu Nov 17, 2005 8:58 pm

No 1 is a tad dull and No 2 is a tad blown... 1 1/2 would be perfect :lol:
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Postby stubbsy on Thu Nov 17, 2005 9:50 pm

To be honest I can't see any difference between the two.
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Postby Oneputt on Thu Nov 17, 2005 10:26 pm

Ghost there is nothing wrong with the kit lens. It is as sharp as you could wish.
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Postby Banjo on Thu Nov 17, 2005 10:56 pm

Out of the 2 I would have to say No 1
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Postby Willy wombat on Thu Nov 17, 2005 11:18 pm

#1 - fix the horizon though.
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Postby moggy on Thu Nov 17, 2005 11:29 pm

No.2 does it for me, nice shot. :wink:

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Postby Maximus on Thu Nov 17, 2005 11:38 pm

I'd say half way in between too. The first one is a tad dull and the second one reminds me of a cartoon that's had the color sucked out of it.
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Postby ghost on Fri Nov 18, 2005 1:50 pm

Thanks everyone for your input

I myself prefer #2 but agree it is a tad blown. FYI here's the colour version:

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Postby Hlop on Fri Nov 18, 2005 3:06 pm

I prefer #1 but wish to see bit more of contrastness BTW, color version is veryy good :)
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Postby jethro on Fri Nov 18, 2005 3:09 pm

A bit of fill in flash may have helped as the pelican is half in shade
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Postby tasadam on Fri Nov 18, 2005 9:00 pm

I think number 1 is too dull. You can see it's sunshine on the beach behind the bird, but it really looks too dull.
Number 2 has hotspots in the forehead and tops of wings, but other than that, it is my preference.
Having seen the colour original, I see the hot spots are there too, so agree with Jethro about the flash.

Love the composition, were you dangling a fish off your lens? :wink:

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