Aireys Inlet on the rocks

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Aireys Inlet on the rocks

Postby Matty B on Wed Feb 23, 2005 9:08 pm

Hi, does this partial desat. work as an easy to view image? The orig. file has got to be THE most uninspiring image, very dull day, poor light etc. I had few exposures on this day so I tried to make something of nothing. Was I flogging a dead horse?

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Postby phillipb on Wed Feb 23, 2005 9:17 pm

Matty, did you try this crop on the original?

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Postby Matty B on Wed Feb 23, 2005 9:21 pm

Geez Phil,
Thanks for the idea. I get through a small project like this one and my mind is devoid of nothing but relief for finishing. I get your crop straight up. The three rock elements work even better than the whole lot. Less is more!

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Postby phillipb on Wed Feb 23, 2005 9:24 pm

No worries mate, post it when you're done.
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Postby xerubus on Wed Feb 23, 2005 9:26 pm

I like the original Matty.... just rotate about 1degree CW to get the horizon to line up...

nice shot...

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Postby Matty B on Wed Feb 23, 2005 9:32 pm

OK this is the cropped version.

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Postby stubbsy on Wed Feb 23, 2005 9:39 pm

Matty

I think the desat is heading in the right direction, but I'm with Xerebus I like the original better than the crop. For me the only problem with the original is the large rock I think you've lightened the shadow too much. Image PP by committee - shows how subjective this stuff is eh!
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Postby phillipb on Wed Feb 23, 2005 9:45 pm

You're right Stubsy, it is very subjective.
My reasoning was, when I look at the original, what attracts my eye is the splash of water. So why not make it more prominant and have the three rocks framing it.
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Postby Matty B on Wed Feb 23, 2005 9:50 pm

I left out a sharpen routine in the cropped version- such was my haste to re-post. Despite being subjectivly assessed by 'The Panel', I'm now confused as to which form of the pic I like! :? :? :?
With frames and mountings etc to be altered endlessly, I guess there are many ways to go with such an image. Xerubus, I have a slightly compresed disk in my spine hence tilted horizon!! :wink: :wink: :wink:
But seriously, It just goes to prove where I have concentrated my efforts and also just when you think you are finished...........
Stubbsy, I have always tended to be heavy handed with the shad/high effect. I'm coming to grips with this by using spot meter to better effect and to blend two different exposures together.
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Postby Matt. K on Thu Feb 24, 2005 11:03 pm

Matty B
I have a slightly compresed disk
.....I have one in my computer! :lol: :lol: :lol:
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Postby Matt. K on Thu Feb 24, 2005 11:03 pm

Matty B
I have a slightly compresed disk
.....I have one in my computer! :lol: :lol: :lol:
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