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Couldnt decide on movement

Postby Willy wombat on Sun Nov 20, 2005 11:09 pm

I have series of movement shots that i wasnt happy with (and didnt enter into the comp). I thought I might post up a few up for the group, so feel free to tell me what you think.

So here is one.

I think the shutter speed may have been to fast in this shot? Very difficult to pan along the angle of the slide unfortunately.


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Postby Alpha_7 on Sun Nov 20, 2005 11:40 pm

I like it, but your right, it could of done with a little more motion blur... something my rejects struggled to get too... I would of also tried to steer clear of slides..as they had been done.. but then again the trapeeze is very similar to swings and a few of them are already in the challenge too.
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Postby Willy wombat on Mon Nov 21, 2005 9:55 pm

Thanks Craig - its amazing to see how many ideas i had that have similar entries. I have a very similar dodgem car photo to the one in the gallery - but its not mine.
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Postby marcotrov on Mon Nov 21, 2005 10:25 pm

Nice and sharp vivid colours but i'd like to see a tighter crop from the top placing the girl in the top third and removing most of the distracting people on the ramp.
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