San Diego in B&W

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San Diego in B&W

Postby calford on Wed Oct 26, 2005 3:43 pm

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First attempt at converting to B&W. Any comments welcomed. I did this with Photoshop and Virtual Photographer plugin, and a D-70S

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Postby poiter86 on Wed Oct 26, 2005 4:26 pm

Hi Al,

Sepia gives the scene an old touch. I keep wanting to see a bit more at the base of the scene. In particular the point of view tends to lead my eye to bottom left of the scene, but when i get there the shot is is cropped off. A portrait crop of the building with towers from the ground up might give a nice shot ... or a wide angle similar to what you have now, but showing some of the street level activities.

Cheers,

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Postby mdboo on Wed Oct 26, 2005 7:29 pm

Hi there Al :D

I agree with Pete, you should try to capture some of ground level.
I want to see more of the bottom left corner !!!

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