Mustang after storm

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Mustang after storm

Postby Nikon boy on Mon Oct 17, 2005 10:12 pm

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Hello I took these just after a thunderstorm and a burst of sunlight appeared, sometimes things come together, D2X Sigma 15-30 @ 100iso
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Postby Muzza22au on Mon Oct 17, 2005 10:15 pm

Nice shots!

Definately like the second one the best!
The first needs the horizon straightened alittle, but still a great shot.
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Postby Nikon boy on Mon Oct 17, 2005 10:19 pm

Scott thanks , i am shocking with horizons, need to pay more attention in the initial capture point, and have ordered a new focus screen with gridlines on it for the D2X, this ''SHOULD'' help !!!
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Postby marcotrov on Mon Oct 17, 2005 10:21 pm

They are both great shots nikon Boy. The first has a little human with inanimate object element with the pilot (i guess) caressing the wing tip of the beast - 'The Partnership'
The second's colour rendition has a vibrancy you have captured well.
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Postby Nikon boy on Mon Oct 17, 2005 10:25 pm

Marco thanks for the comments ,actually the first pic is of the pilot with the Aircraft, he has a microphone in his hand giving a commentary to an assembled bunch of Aviation nuts !
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Postby Geoff on Mon Oct 17, 2005 10:35 pm

These are great shots, so crystal clear and sharp...mind me asking if you did any PP on them?
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Postby Nikon boy on Mon Oct 17, 2005 10:38 pm

Hi Geoff yes i did very small amount of basic colour balance and sharpening, didn't have to do much as conditions were amazing !!
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Postby Matt. K on Mon Oct 17, 2005 11:00 pm

Supurb images! Frame them!
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Postby Catcha on Tue Oct 18, 2005 12:00 am

Both shots look great :D
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Postby sirhc55 on Tue Oct 18, 2005 12:02 am

Excellent :D
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Postby Nikon boy on Tue Oct 18, 2005 7:36 am

thanks for the feedback, I have printed these at home on ilford smooth pearl paper and they look fantastic, great paper if you havent tried it do so !!
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Postby Greg B on Tue Oct 18, 2005 9:30 am

Great shots of a fantastic aircraft Norm, nice work.

Number 2 is my favourite.
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Postby BBJ on Tue Oct 18, 2005 10:34 am

Great shots nothing like a good old warbird. Well done very nice.
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Postby ozimax on Tue Oct 18, 2005 8:54 pm

Crisp, clear, concerted effort here Nikon, Max
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Postby Raskill on Wed Oct 19, 2005 10:40 am

Nice, I like number two the best. The colours are fantastic! Well done.
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Postby stubbsy on Wed Oct 19, 2005 1:22 pm

WHy do I always like the "other" one. #1 does it for me because you've got the pilot in frame gazing off into the distance. Gives the shot more character and context.
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Postby Nikon boy on Wed Oct 19, 2005 2:39 pm

Stubbsy, i reckon you have a point there, i do often try to include the human element
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Postby Killakoala on Wed Oct 19, 2005 7:01 pm

The P51 is a wonderful machine and i'd love to own one to fly around. Great pics, great timing with the rainy thing (although not rare in Melbourne :) ) and really nice subject matter all combined to give me a FFFWWHHOOOAARRRR....
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Postby fozzie on Wed Oct 19, 2005 7:34 pm

Nikon boy - the second for me. I like the colour contrast of the sky: with

the reflection in the water, a much darker blue, well done.
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Postby mudder on Wed Oct 19, 2005 7:37 pm

Wow! These are great, I like the first with the human element in the image, but the colour in the second one is stunning.

Immediately after heavy rain is a fantastic time for clarity of the air, great images!
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Postby elffinarts on Wed Oct 19, 2005 9:30 pm

While the first shot has the human element I really like the lighting in the second shot far better.
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