Sci-fi Night Shots

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Sci-fi Night Shots

Postby dooda on Fri Oct 14, 2005 11:31 am

Last week I found a nifty little spot by the shipyard. I'm starting to go for more surreal effects, giving the tints a noticeable purple push, and exposing a little longer for a surreal sci-fi effect. The sky sucked, so I'm thinking of heading back.


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I'd love to hear your thoughts. The second one I hate the building on the right, the first one I don't know about the horizontal log, and the last one, I don't know what to think about that one, other than I love the cool purple sky.
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Postby MHD on Fri Oct 14, 2005 11:39 am

Last one is awesome... Looks like a space ship!
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Postby wendellt on Fri Oct 14, 2005 11:44 am

I would call it hyper-real, instead of sci fi
they are all very beautiful and composed thoughtfully.
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Postby KerryPierce on Fri Oct 14, 2005 11:44 am

I think the 1st and 3rd are very cool shots, Dave, just the way they are. Quite surreal. :D
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Postby stubbsy on Fri Oct 14, 2005 11:54 am

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Great find & well executed. #2 is the weakest. Is the purple hue part of the PP, or is this how it came out of the camera?
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Postby krpolak on Fri Oct 14, 2005 11:56 am

#3 - This is a great shot. Just a shame that you didnt correct perspective. Look at crane chains, they deny physics :)

#2 - This one doesnt work for me

#1 - That one is interesting. Contrast between silky water and rought rocks. You could cut of sky since it disctract atention from subject. Dont ask viewer to search a focus. Drop it right into his/her face.

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Postby cc@t on Fri Oct 14, 2005 12:05 pm

Mate I reckon all three are great - no. 3 looks like "Revenge of the Cranes" !!!!
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Postby Wocka on Fri Oct 14, 2005 12:10 pm

No# 1 is definatly my favorite.
I agree no# 2 the building draws your attention away.

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Postby Geoff on Fri Oct 14, 2005 12:14 pm

Wow...great work! Seeing images like this makes me want to tell everyone to go and get the Epson R1800.

I've done a few prints this morning...ooooooooh yah!! It's nice :)

By the way, what was the time exposure for the first image? It's a ripper!
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Postby shinwood on Fri Oct 14, 2005 4:32 pm

Great Stuff Dave, I love them all but the 3rd is a killer.

What sort of exposure did you have?

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Postby Big V on Fri Oct 14, 2005 4:57 pm

Love the colours and composition in the 3rd shot
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Postby elffinarts on Fri Oct 14, 2005 7:29 pm

that 3rd shot is my fave! Great hues and the ship just looks amazing like that. Very sci fi.
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Postby bloop on Fri Oct 14, 2005 7:42 pm

I like the first one, nice eerie feeling to it. Like the detail in the foreground, too, great atmosphere, could imagine being there... oooh spooky!
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Postby Dougie on Fri Oct 14, 2005 11:23 pm

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Reallly love the first and third shot. Just not quite sure about the second. But I do realy love the first one, could almost see it as a back drop to a horror movie , spookie.
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Postby mic on Sat Oct 15, 2005 12:03 am

Just brilliant Doodles,

Yes, what exposures / Lens etc please.

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Postby sirhc55 on Sat Oct 15, 2005 1:06 am

#2 is just superb - why? Because it is the only one IMO that fits the title - well done Dave :D
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Postby Digidegs on Sat Oct 15, 2005 1:09 am

Great stuff!!
Love #1
Maybe #3 ccould be great with some clever cropping to get rid of the crane?
Also what are the specs for the shots ie lens, exposure etc.
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Postby dooda on Sat Oct 15, 2005 10:13 am

Thanks for the comments everyone.

#1 is 258 secs at f11 (I keep most of my stuff between f8-f13) with kit lens.

#2 is 333 secs at F8.

#3 is 98 secs at F8

I'm having a bit of fun with the tint slider in the Raw Plugin lately, adding a little purple, and I move the wb towards the cold side, to get the surreal bluish color.

I find I'll start the evening by shooting at f13, and by the end I want to go home and everything is F 8. #3 came out underexposed, I pushed it a little in Raw. There's no way I would ever shoot anything like this in jpeg. It must be Raw all the way.
All my shots are taken with the kit lens.

The Crane is a part of the picture so I don't want to crop it out, and I don't know how to do perspective correction in PS. I decided to keep it like this as the ship boat thing is the primary subject, so I made it look the most normal, while sacrificing the proper angle of the crane.

I also tend to leave a little sky at the top incase I want to print an 8x10, but yes, there is a tad too much sky there. I really appreciate the comments.

There are a couple more on my flickrpage, all of them are on the front page so have a peek if you like. You can also access the exif data on the properties link beside the photo (after you click on it).
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Postby krpolak on Sat Oct 15, 2005 10:22 am

Dooda,

About shot #3 and crane. Actually you could leave it as it this without ony perspective correction. It gives this extra punch of surrealism.

Also I wold not crop anything here. Sky gives space to both of those element.

It is just perfect shot.

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