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Interacting with subject (7 images)

Postby krpolak on Mon Oct 10, 2005 2:28 pm

Interacting with subject is one of the most important things in creative photography. Interacting with subject gives possibilities to find new compositions, new angles, new views and the most important to start to 'feel'your subject, its apperance, its form, its colour and potencial.

When I do photos I found that very often the best shots come as third or fourth or even later. Interacting with subject gives possibility to stop for a moment and think.

I strongly suggest to beginers wanting progress in creative photography to use primes or......lock you zooms for a moment. For a day, a week or a month. Take a challange. Go and shoot. And see what is a result and is it any better then before.

I agree with some opinions that good photographer can do good photos with any lens, prime or zoom, since good photography requires thinking anyway. That is true, but only half true. In learning process adding new variable, which is abbility for zooming, can be for many to difficult to handle. Go and get cheap prime or lock your zoom and start to shoot.

Lest this few thoughts be my contribution to this great community.

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Postby the foto fanatic on Mon Oct 10, 2005 3:22 pm

Thanks for posting these krpolak. I like them all, but in particular #7. :D

I agree with your message about interacting with your subject, and also with your statement that often, the third or fourth viewpoint will give a better image than the first.
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Postby Marvin on Mon Oct 10, 2005 4:15 pm

I find these very interesting. I would never think to take pictures of things like this. I kept coming back to the third one. That is a great piece of advice too.
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Postby krpolak on Mon Oct 10, 2005 4:21 pm

Thanks guys for comments. I am pretty sure that viewers choice will vary greatly :)

Third one is an exception in this series. All other are solid, rather heavy shapes. This one shows very fine works - wires + high key detailed texture. Its very light.

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Postby Oneputt on Mon Oct 10, 2005 4:29 pm

I like most of them, but then again I like all things abstract (or most) :wink:
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Postby Alpha_7 on Mon Oct 10, 2005 5:51 pm

I posted after the backup, so my original comment was lost, but I really like these set, some really simple and effective images.


Shot 2 I'd really like to know more about, with what I can see it looks remarkable like the walls of Dr Who's TARDIS, which is very cool.

The colours in 4 and 5 are exquiste!!
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Postby krpolak on Mon Oct 10, 2005 6:37 pm

Alpha_7,

Shot #2 is an exception from title I gave to this thread. This is a ceiling of MCL (as far as I remember name correctly) building in City and I manage take only this one shot before security guys came ;-)

I think that #4 nad #5 I prefer the most. They look like orange ice cave :)

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Postby Dargan on Mon Oct 10, 2005 9:06 pm

Great perspectives as usual on everyday objects. Thank you for the images Krystian. One thing that made me pause was the comment on 'security guys' ...what have we come to today when you cannot take an image of a ceiling, some sort of Kafkaesque existence?
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Postby Sheetshooter on Mon Oct 10, 2005 9:14 pm

Delighted to see shades of the Kristian of old shining through. I do hope that you are archiving htese images for possible later publication as an entire opus.

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Postby krpolak on Mon Oct 10, 2005 9:22 pm

Dargan,

It is shame. The same when I was going make some outside shots through glass in Greenwood Plaza in North Sydney. I barely pointed my camera up and was stopped by security. BTW, they were quite quick, I must admit.

Well, we are heading into dark ages, when personal freedom will be sacrificed in sake of....yeah, in sake of what? But before this time will came, lets have some fun with our cameras :)



Sheetshooter.

Thanks Sheetshooter. I must admit that this possibility goes around my head for a while. Not now, but propably in shorter future I am going to hit into some places and maybe also make kind of small book/booklet. But this is the future :)

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Postby wendellt on Mon Oct 10, 2005 9:26 pm

I can see more in each of your images than i could see if i were actually standing right in front of the subject.

There is much thought in your presentation of images, subtle green tones first, then orange then b+w
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Postby krpolak on Mon Oct 10, 2005 9:35 pm

Wendellt,

Its like in movie. You might have a bunch of great scenes, but in not proper order there will not make great impresion :) i usually forget that ;-)

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Postby wendellt on Mon Oct 10, 2005 9:43 pm

krpolak wrote:Wendellt,

Its like in movie. You might have a bunch of great scenes, but in not proper order there will not make great impresion :) i usually forget that ;-)

Thanks for comment,

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Yes truer words were never spoken

I am a designer as well, I look at something and see form, function, tone, balance before intent. You capture design elements with such confidence, I am sure you take your time when composing and that goes for presentation too.
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Postby jethro on Mon Oct 10, 2005 10:02 pm

Intuative is the word. Art is the theme and its nice to see a personal expression
Well done Kpolak
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Postby krpolak on Mon Oct 10, 2005 10:25 pm

Thanks for good words guys. I appreciate you feedback :)

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Postby ajo43 on Mon Oct 10, 2005 10:59 pm

Kristian

I am very intested in seeing more of your work. I can imagine those pictures blown up very large and framed in a gallery as a series.

They kind of had a retro almost frightening feel to them - very orwellian, or maybe something from Clockwork Orange.
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Postby Willy wombat on Mon Oct 10, 2005 11:07 pm

ajo43 wrote:Kristian

I am very intested in seeing more of your work. I can imagine those pictures blown up very large and framed in a gallery as a series.

They kind of had a retro almost frightening feel to them - very orwellian, or maybe something from Clockwork Orange.


Me too Jonesy. Top pics and top post. I like them a lot.
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Postby krpolak on Mon Oct 10, 2005 11:16 pm

Thanks guys. Kubric is one of my favourite directors :D

I am realeasing my website very soon. Will collect most of pics together.

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Postby mic on Tue Oct 11, 2005 12:06 am

Amazing what a persons Eye & Mind can see & use a tool to comunicate it with.

Amazing stuff, well done Kristian.

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Re: Interacting with subject (7 images)

Postby nat on Tue Oct 11, 2005 9:57 am

krpolak wrote:I strongly suggest to beginers wanting progress in creative photography to use primes or......lock you zooms for a moment. For a day, a week or a month. Take a challange. Go and shoot. And see what is a result and is it any better then before.


With this in mind, do you think that there is a particular length of lens that would be the most beneficial to use when learning? Or does it not matter that much?

I don't want you to give all of your secrets away, but can I ask what length lens you used for this series of images?

Thanks for offering your thoughts. I am very much a beginner and always look forward to your tips and advice.
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Postby krpolak on Tue Oct 11, 2005 10:32 am

Meerkat,

Type of lens or rather its focal length is quite important since that determines how perspective works as well as relation between elements in frame. If you have got a zoom lens, make an experiment. Set your lens on the shortest lenght and select subject that will almost fill your frame. Then select the longest lenght and shoot the subject in exactly the same way - it should fill your frame again. Then compare those two images. You will see how defrently works planes and perspective.

I usually use two lenses: 28mm and 105mm. Which one really depends on what I shoot, how far from subject I am and what I want to show.

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Postby Yedrup on Tue Oct 11, 2005 1:02 pm

krpolak,

These are great images, a terrific view of the world as just shape, texture and juxtaposition. Thank you for sharing.

My favourite is No 3, closely followed by No 7, both would be great blown up, printed, framed and most importanately displayed for all to see.

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Postby radar on Tue Oct 11, 2005 3:18 pm

Kristian,

thanks for sharing these with us. Looking at what you present to us reminds me to look at things differently, and you certainly achieve this with this series.

#3, #5 and #7 are my favourites. Make sure to let us know when your webiste is available,

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Postby kamran on Tue Oct 11, 2005 11:21 pm

Like somebody else said; top pics and top post. Such simple images yet so much story behind them.
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Postby krpolak on Tue Oct 11, 2005 11:43 pm

Thanks again for your generous comments guys :)

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