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Manta Portrait .......

Postby JordanP on Wed Oct 05, 2005 10:52 pm

......after a couple of reds and some PP

... as war photojournalist
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... and as wildlife photographer
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Postby BBJ on Wed Oct 05, 2005 11:03 pm

Craig, thats really cool, #2 is great. Now how did you do that??? LOL
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Postby Manta on Wed Oct 05, 2005 11:07 pm

I'm very flattered Craig - they are fantastic effects that almost make me look like a half decent photographer! I love what you've done with, I assume, the Flaming Pear "Flood" plugin?

Only advice I can give is DRINK MORE RED; it seems to be working well! :wink:
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Postby JordanP on Wed Oct 05, 2005 11:11 pm

yep it is the flaming pear 'flood' plugin. I then extended the water using the healing brush and a bit of blur and smudge - then used the burn tool to make your shirt and the water edges look wet.

It was fun!
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Postby BBJ on Wed Oct 05, 2005 11:12 pm

Thats is great i am gathering that is not a freebie plug in? But looks the part.
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Postby JordanP on Wed Oct 05, 2005 11:17 pm

BBJ wrote:Thats is great i am gathering that is not a freebie plug in? But looks the part.


yep, that plug in is a freebie.... I will try and find where I got it from. I think it was big pix that introduced us to the link quite some time ago... not sure :?
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Postby Manta on Wed Oct 05, 2005 11:19 pm

JordanP wrote:yep it is the flaming pear 'flood' plugin. I then extended the water using the healing brush and a bit of blur and smudge - then used the burn tool to make your shirt and the water edges look wet.

It was fun!


Yes - I noticed the level of detail you went to and it really sells the effect. Excellent result!

I work with a guy who's a highly-regarded wildlife photographer and writer so I'll have to show him this to score some brownie points. He runs twice-yearly Photography Weeks at Binna Burra and knows the place like the back of his hand so he'll probably recognise that tree!
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Postby BBJ on Wed Oct 05, 2005 11:20 pm

Thanks mate, that would be good to have play with, if not email it to me mate. Yeh that #2 pic would look so great if he didnt have his back pack on, but yeh great.
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Postby JordanP on Wed Oct 05, 2005 11:22 pm

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Postby BBJ on Wed Oct 05, 2005 11:34 pm

Thanks Craig having a look now.
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Postby leek on Wed Oct 05, 2005 11:39 pm

Very nice PP work Craig... but as BBJ implied - I think his packed lunch might be a little soggy...
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Postby sirhc55 on Thu Oct 06, 2005 12:51 am

The art of deception has to be done with finesse, otherwise it does not stand up. When I first looked at pic #2 I thought, what kind of idiot would immerse himself in water like that for a pic.

Craig - pure finesse - well done :D
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Postby Aussie Dave on Thu Oct 06, 2005 8:30 am

really nice PP work on these - especially the 2nd one.

Perhaps you could do another version of the wildlife one, with the tip of a croc's snout coming into the photo from the bottom right corner ? :lol:

I think I need to get this "flood" action !
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Postby Oneputt on Thu Oct 06, 2005 8:34 am

Love it, brought more than just a smile to my face. Simon you photograph well :wink:
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Postby the foto fanatic on Thu Oct 06, 2005 8:52 am

Excellent work Craig. :D
A touch of Indiana Jones adventure for you, Simon. :lol:
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Postby johnd on Thu Oct 06, 2005 9:49 am

Craig, 2 great shots/pp effects. A suggestion. Enter the 2nd one (wildlife photog) in the Today comp. It might just be the winning formula.
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Postby Manta on Thu Oct 06, 2005 7:47 pm

cricketfan wrote:Excellent work Craig. :D
A touch of Indiana Jones adventure for you, Simon. :lol:


Hah!

I hope Chris doesn't think I am the sort of 'idiot' that would immerse himself like this in deep water to get a shot. That'd be stupid. I'd take my pack off first. I'll have a go at anything but feeding my lunch to the crocs, eels, turtles, sharks or piranha is just not on. :wink:

Here's a similar sort of shot with NO special effects. This is my work mate's site - check the bottom photo <a href=http://www.michaelsnedic.com/bio.htm>here</a>.
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Postby the foto fanatic on Thu Oct 06, 2005 10:26 pm

Manta wrote: I'd take my pack off first. I'll have a go at anything but feeding my lunch to the crocs, eels, turtles, sharks or piranha is just not on. :wink:


Wouldn't only be your lunch that they'd nibble on! :wink:

Your mate is certainly a dedicated wild-life photog.
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Postby rebel on Fri Oct 07, 2005 2:40 am

oh thanks for the cool filter! here is what i came up with :-)

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Postby Nnnnsic on Fri Oct 07, 2005 3:03 am

Jordan... both of those shots are great, but number 1 does it for me.
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Postby Manta on Fri Oct 07, 2005 7:53 am

Nice work Eugene.
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Postby BBJ on Fri Oct 07, 2005 8:09 am

I can see the headlines, Crikey now wheres that crocodile??? LOL
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