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by mic on Mon Oct 03, 2005 12:04 am
Tulip
Had a Macro session with a vase of Tulips my wife brought home, there are a few so this is the 1st of them that I will be showing over the week ahead.
Yes, everybody will be bored of Tulips once I finish
This one was shot with my Micro Nikkor 105mm @ F: 22 / 10 Secs under Tungsten Light ( Hence the name )
I hope you enjoy my passionate experience with my Tulips around Midnight on a Saturday night  I have to get out more I think.
Mic.
Tungsten Tulipa
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by PiroStitch on Mon Oct 03, 2005 12:12 am
Being intimate with a tulip? I'm not sure about this fetish of yours Mic  I hope your wife understood why you were up at midnight with a flower instead of her
Great pic nevertheless and love the effect and contrast the water droplets bring out in the tulip.
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by stubbsy on Mon Oct 03, 2005 12:14 am
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You've got bloody good haven't you. Love the detail on this and your (new) trademark black background. I can't wait for the rest in the series.
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by hangdog on Mon Oct 03, 2005 1:20 am
Damn, what a knockout photo! Beautifully done.
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by rokkstar on Mon Oct 03, 2005 10:28 am
Excellent.
Very nice shot - love the water drops
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by Killakoala on Mon Oct 03, 2005 11:00 am
Beautifully produced. I can see where the intimacy comes from. 
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by kipper on Mon Oct 03, 2005 11:07 am
This is a great photo Mic but I'm sure you could take it one step further.
I would have liked to have seen this with out the distracting leaves/foliage/sepal on the bottom left. Would also have liked to have seen the receptacle (the green bit were the petals join the stem) of the tulip and maybe a bit more centered.
They're my only nits, the rest is spot on. Great colors, llighting, exposure and the water droplets add a nice touch.
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by sirhc55 on Mon Oct 03, 2005 11:35 am
Beautiful - and thank God it’s not the ”i” word 
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by mic on Mon Oct 03, 2005 4:20 pm
Thanks Wayne,  Yes, the Wifey was asking the same thing
Thanks Stubbsy,  I am pretty happy how this turned out.
Thanks Kerry, FLOWER POWER  I have to find something different to shoot
Thanks hangdog,
Thanks rockstar,  Always keep a spray bottle in the laundry I say
Thanks Killa,  Glad to know I'm not completly Bonkers
Thanks Kipper,  I left the other bits in to make it different & off centre as well, I do agree I could have got a bit of the stem in though.
Thanks Chris,  I think I have grown and moved on from the inverting stage unless I come across something that it does work on that is.
Cheers all, stay tuned for more Tulipa coming your way.
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by stubbsy on Mon Oct 03, 2005 5:21 pm
sirhc55 wrote:Beautiful - and thank God it’s not the ”i” word 
Sad confession to make. Took me a while to work out what the "i" word was until I saw mic's reply 
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by mic on Mon Oct 03, 2005 5:55 pm
And Another.
Pinkus Tulipa
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by big pix on Mon Oct 03, 2005 6:06 pm
very well done mic....... you have come a long way in a short time ....... your creative side has bloomed..........
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by jethro on Mon Oct 03, 2005 6:12 pm
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It has to be a horny type thing you are now phasing into. correct me or not.
You, after you sabbatical have come of age photographically wise that is. Now lift to the next level. Shoot it whatever and more.
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look! and see. Shoot and feel
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by stubbsy on Mon Oct 03, 2005 6:40 pm
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The second shot is less striking to me. The RHS is beautifully done, but the image is let down by the large OOF area on the LHS - a problem with the shallow DOF you're playing with 
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by mic on Mon Oct 03, 2005 10:52 pm
Thanks bp,  Very Blooming of ya
Thanks Jethro,  Yes, very Horny time for me  I just have to keep it going with the idea's & get out of Flowers I think, thanks for the Pats on the back mate.
Fair enough Stubbsy,  I tend to agree with you, maybe you might like this one a bit better ?
Thanks all,
Mic Tip Toeing Through
Rising Pink
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by mic on Mon Oct 03, 2005 11:36 pm
And this one
Within Tulipa
I didn't focus on the Stamin on purpose, this one looks better than the focused Stamin one does with the pattern in the background.
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by stubbsy on Tue Oct 04, 2005 11:39 am
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Rising pink is a little drab - probably a combo of the dark image and the pale tulip, but nice & sharp. Last one is interesting, but just misses the mark somehow
Oh and it's stamen
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